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  1. Hey Bossman, fun read. Fun, and yet I'm in all...

    Hey Bossman, fun read. Fun, and yet I'm in all sort of disagreement! Your position seems to indicate that "people," presumably the mainstream/casual fans/non-wrestling fans, spend any amount of time...
  2. Prime Time—I’ve now probably read this column...

    Prime Time—I’ve now probably read this column three times (and it’s a long one!), and have been thinking about it off and on for a couple of days. So, first of all—congrats on the thought-provoking...
  3. Benjamin Button for columnist Scott Woodburn's...

    Benjamin Button for columnist

    Scott Woodburn's "Wear Sunscreen" for column
  4. Thanks Dynamite, Mizfan, and SirSam for the...

    Thanks Dynamite, Mizfan, and SirSam for the feedback and the responses.

    Dynamite, I like your words "fall from grace." I definitely feel like Wyatt's trajectory has seen many falls from grace. I...
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    SO until I read SirSam's response I didn't know...

    SO until I read SirSam's response I didn't know who Greta Thunberg is--my level of attention to current events is woefully inadequate. I quickly familiarized myself with her and the speech you're...
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    BEAR--nice work, overall. By not identifying your...

    BEAR--nice work, overall. By not identifying your audience you hooked me at the top, so that I had to read a few lines to figure out who you were addressing. It became fairly obvious it was the...
  7. Full Production Feedback: Why Seth Rollins Must Lose the Universal Championship to Rey Mysterio

    Full Production Feedback: Why Seth Rollins Must Lose the Universal Championship to Rey Mysterio
    by pennycook mills



    Iím going to insist that Seth Rollins must lose the Universal Heavyweight...
  8. scottwoodburn I think this is an excellent piece...

    scottwoodburn I think this is an excellent piece of writing. It's expository, makes an argument, and is a nice trim piece of work that doesn't outstay its welcome by a single word. Well done.

    I'm...
  9. Zombieguy, this is as smooth and well-written of...

    Zombieguy, this is as smooth and well-written of a piece as I've seen on this forum. You pack so much venom and content into each sentence it's a masterclass of language. Your structure is coherent...
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    Cathe, I'll echo the others here that your...

    Cathe, I'll echo the others here that your written English in this piece is very good--nothing to worry about there. And the more you do it, the better you'll get so I am hoping this is just the...
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