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  1. Maz was apparently too busy watching porn to be...

    Maz was apparently too busy watching porn to be smart about the HBK Cena match.

    Seriously, I find the lack of Shawn Michaels appreciation in these tournaments disturbing (in James Earl Jones...
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    On Mizfan's last line...me too. Perhaps on the...

    On Mizfan's last line...me too. Perhaps on the Twittah! : )

    Excellent work to cap off a series of excellent pieces. A few spacing issues caught my eye early, but the flow of your work has made...
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    Rock solid stuff here. I agree with...

    Rock solid stuff here. I agree with Mizfan...just not an easy topic to do anything original with given how many column inches and podcast minutes have been dedicated to fixing WWE. That said, this...
  4. This was solid. Less is more. If it suits you...

    This was solid. Less is more. If it suits you to write a 1300 word column, go for it. I liked your work in the earlier rounds better, and each were capped at a fairly succinct word limit. Just...
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    Excellent work and my apologies for delaying my...

    Excellent work and my apologies for delaying my feedback. It certainly flirted with that "wait, is this about wrestling at all?" dynamic, but you managed it well.

    You have the skills to be a main...
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    Well, the opportunity was there for you to leap...

    Well, the opportunity was there for you to leap ahead of Scott, but this was your weakest effort too. C'mon gentlemen. It's the final. Granted, I've not always written my best stuff in finals,...
  7. Definitely your weakest effort, Scott. 'Plan hit...

    Definitely your weakest effort, Scott. 'Plan hit on my primary criticism, which was the not so seamless transition from the early stages to the recap-heavy section, to which I'll say this: just...
  8. Your way too polished to be a rookie. Surely...

    Your way too polished to be a rookie. Surely you're not a rookie. If not, you're a wrestling column writing prodigy.

    I'd definitely say you're the favorite to win the tournament right now
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    I love the line "Stand for Something, or Fall for...

    I love the line "Stand for Something, or Fall for Anything"

    Kind of a mixed bag for me. What I desire to see from tournament efforts is continuous improvement. I think you've been rock solid...
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    I enjoyed this exploration and thought it was...

    I enjoyed this exploration and thought it was pretty consistent, quality wise, with what you put out in Round 2.

    I'd have been very happy reading this on the main page. Interestingly, I felt...
  11. Well, you certainly fooled me! This was fine. ...

    Well, you certainly fooled me!

    This was fine. The twist there at the end definitely boosts it in my eyes, but the writing leading up to the climax was just fine.
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    Yet again, tons of potential shown here. I was...

    Yet again, tons of potential shown here. I was sucked into your prose from the start. Quite evidently, an intelligent human being crafted this piece. Eventually, the smarts have to translate to the...
  13. Very nice work here

    Very nice work here
  14. Echoing Button's comments, you had plenty of time...

    Echoing Button's comments, you had plenty of time (presumably) to give this a good thorough re-read before posting. Perhaps you were on vacation and had to do this quickly. Fair enough if that's...
  15. "Unfortunately I think the problem with wrestling...

    "Unfortunately I think the problem with wrestling isn’t one of binge watching, but watching the binge that wrestling has become. "

    Loved that line. A creative line like that in the first...
  16. Still seeing more potential than talent realized,...

    Still seeing more potential than talent realized, mainly on account of the sentence structure, so my main piece of advice is to clean it up a bit. Sentence fragments are rather jarring to me...
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    That was more like it, sir. I enjoyed your...

    That was more like it, sir.

    I enjoyed your take on the topic, how you used the topic to cover a lot of ground. I would've liked to have seen a conclusion that better tied the ground you covered...
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    Best column of yours that I've read. Nicely done!

    Best column of yours that I've read. Nicely done!
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    I really just want to echo Mav and 'Plan's...

    I really just want to echo Mav and 'Plan's thoughts here. Did you send this to any of the vets who have made themselves available to you? I would assume you're in this tournament to get better. ...
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    This was my second favorite column of the round. ...

    This was my second favorite column of the round. Mid-way through, I was thinking, "I'm going to ask him if I can post this on the MP" because I think it would be a good generator of discussion. So,...
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    Not to beat a dead horse, but what's with the...

    Not to beat a dead horse, but what's with the cursing? In that one line mid-way through, I thought it made it clear how excited you were about AEW's presence in the industry. From then on, it made...
  22. Nice to see you writing in here, first and...

    Nice to see you writing in here, first and foremost.

    I liked this column. I appreciated the topic and the commitment to detail. It read, however, like a very raw column writer's work. There's...
  23. Probably. "Dry" was a description I saw another...

    Probably. "Dry" was a description I saw another commenter use, and I'd agree with that too. I guess when push comes to shove, choose passion. In my mind's eye, I see the word limit dictating less...
  24. I've been looking forward to having the chance to...

    I've been looking forward to having the chance to connect more with your work. You've been around for a bit and I recall (correctly?) wanting to get you into my column writing workshop / Davey Boy...
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    This was the first column of the tournament that...

    This was the first column of the tournament that I read and it set the tone for the other five writers as far as I'm concerned. You could say that your column set the bell curve and nobody else came...
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